This first paragraph is the ending of chapter one
My heart was racing as the elevator doors opened. I stepped out and I was walking down the hall, I felt like my heart popped out of my chest and landed flat on the floor. This is it. I thought to myself. I opened the door and it creaked open. I quietly looked in. Nothing. I kept walking further and futher in. I finally saw Ashley’s body laid out on the floor. The knife the murder used was covered in blood, lying right beside her mangled body.
Chapter 2 Her Body
Chapter 2 Her Body
Of course she had her face to the floor. I turned her mangaled body over. It was horrifying. She was covered in blood from head to too. There was cuts all over her body. It was the most grewsome thing I have ever seen.
I stood there stund in amazement still trying to get the image of her mangaled body through my head. A horrible, choked scream made its way out of my mouth, and I fought the urge to flee in blind terror. The urge keept coming back stronger and stronger. It got so strong that I picked up the knife and….. It went black. I heard the ambulance wailing but all I could see was black. I knew I must have done something terrifying for me to hear the sirens and see blackness. I don’t ever rember what happened but I somehow had the image of her mangled body, the knife, the crime scence, but nothing else. Its like my memory is wiped blank. A clean slate almost. Still complete darkness.
I stood there stund in amazement still trying to get the image of her mangaled body through my head. A horrible, choked scream made its way out of my mouth, and I fought the urge to flee in blind terror. The urge keept coming back stronger and stronger. It got so strong that I picked up the knife and….. It went black. I heard the ambulance wailing but all I could see was black. I knew I must have done something terrifying for me to hear the sirens and see blackness. I don’t ever rember what happened but I somehow had the image of her mangled body, the knife, the crime scence, but nothing else. Its like my memory is wiped blank. A clean slate almost. Still complete darkness.
To be continued........
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